January 22, 2008 9:09 pm
Microfiction - 022/365
Posted by Will under fiction
Roadkill
Davis yanked a hard right onto Robertson from Wilshire and watched as the stolen car suspect he’d been chasing through Beverly Hills since he lit up the hot Jaguar at Santa Monica Boulevard slowed down, flung the driver’s side door open and bailed out of the moving car, dropping into a seemingly well-practiced roll across the double yellow line while the car he’d exited careened into a line of parked cars at the curb like some kind of stunt in an action movie, except this wasn’t.
Apparently the suspect thought it was though, because instead of getting up and running, the guy finished his tumbling routine up on one knee with a pistol aimed directly at the surprised Davis who would most certainly have been shot at had the driver of the Escalade speeding northbound been concentrating less on her cell phone conversation and more on the kneeling perp she drove over.


January 23rd, 2008 at 2:45 pm
Terrific vignette, Will, but what you have here, in essence, is a story comprised of two run-on sentences. Did you mean to do that?
January 23rd, 2008 at 3:24 pm
Ha! I don’t really know what I’m doing here Rodger, much less what I might be meaning to do!
Sometimes it’s just a matter of spitting it out of my head and my head’s never been one to punctuate.
January 23rd, 2008 at 5:37 pm
Well, get yourself a roll of AP paper and just let it flow out like Kerouac did.
January 24th, 2008 at 12:07 pm
Good one.