January 1, 2008 9:31 am
Maybe It’s Make Believe: Microfiction - 001/365
Posted by Will under fiction
So here I am in a brand new year and one of my many resolves for 2008 is to do something free-form creative here on a daily basis. Good? Long? Bad? Short? First person? Third? Doesn’t matter. What matters is that my imagination muscles get themselves some sort of regular exercise, though perhaps at your expense. But enough of the preambling, let me yank this first rabbit outta my hat before I chicken out. Let’s call it…
Taking Steps
With several hunched-shouldered and purposeful strides down the hallway toward me, Barnes had closed the distance not unlike the way a linebacker might close on an unprotected quarterback, or a raging bull upon a matador.
In the tight corridor I had two choices: fight or flight. Either face him or turn tail and retreat for the stairwell. I hadn’t quite made up my mind when I heard him yell over his shoulder tohis assistant after passing her cubicle.
“Tess, you better call the paramedics,” he said entirely too calm. “And the police.” As an afterthought he added, “Better type up my letter of resignation, too.”
Tess responded by leaning out beyond the partition and looking at me. From the frightened and quizical look on her face I posited that it was probably not unlike the one possessing my own. As if sensing her hesitance, Barnes barked out with his angry eyes locked entirely on mine.
“By the time I’m through with Simpson, he’ll either be dead or in need of an ER room. Either way, I’ll be out of a job and in need of arrest. So hop to it!”
I saw Tess nod in a mix of confusion and concern before disappearing and in a few more of Barnes’ angry strides, he had gotten close enough for me to get a good clean look into his eyes and what I saw wasn’t pretty. In fact it was pretty scary. I wanted to explain why he was getting ready to physicalize his fury on the wrong person. How it wasn’t my fault — at least not entirely. But clearly that would have to be at another time and place. Or at the very least a minimum safe distance.
My decision was made. I ran.
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January 1st, 2008 at 1:12 pm
Nice First Step, I do hope tomorrow you will continue it as I want to know what happens next.
January 1st, 2008 at 1:42 pm
Not bad, Will, not bad at all for meta-fiction. Your opening graph, though, is clunky and lacking in the suspense that you convey through the rest of the short tale:
“With several hunched-shouldered and purposeful strides down the hallway toward me, Barnes had closed the distance not unlike the way a linebacker might close on an unprotected quarterback, or a raging bull upon a matador.”
Okay, try it this way:
“Barnes closed the distance on me like a menacing linebacker hurtling toward an unprotected quarterback.”
See? Immediate tension. A palpable threat of violence.
ad. Your opening graph is clunky:
January 1st, 2008 at 1:44 pm
Mark, this story reads well as a piece of stand-alone micro or meta fiction (what the fuck is the distinction between the two?)
January 1st, 2008 at 2:11 pm
Hurray! Fiction!
January 1st, 2008 at 3:33 pm
Awesome note, Rodger! I wasn’t expecting to be schooled but it’s totally appreciated!
And Mark, maybe the saga of Simpson v. Barnes will continue, but right now it’s like Rodger said: meta and micro!
January 1st, 2008 at 3:38 pm
Will, why the hell is that guy so pissed? you steal his girl, his boy? serialize this sucker. nice. But I’d listen to Rodger. According to his bio, dude earned his writing chops crafting prose for such literary giants as Hustler and my own private guilty pleasure when I need a fix of quality fiction, High Society.
January 1st, 2008 at 4:32 pm
Timothy, did I overlook my one year stint as editor-in-chief of New Rave magazine, a worthless rag whose sole purpose on shelves was to push the 20 pages of phone sex ads in the back of the book?
Yeah, good times.
January 1st, 2008 at 6:15 pm
just havin fun:) Happy New Year
January 1st, 2008 at 6:17 pm
Same to you, Tim.
January 3rd, 2008 at 12:35 am
Ok, its been like 20 years since I have taken a creative writing or literature course and I sure as heck don’t remember what micro fiction or meta-fiction are. Please will someone enlighten this poor philistine in the wilderness.
January 3rd, 2008 at 8:43 am
Micro fiction — also known as flash fiction, meta fiction, etc. — generally is a vey brief short story, usually under 1,000 or 2,000 words. There are no hard and fast rules, except for brevity.